WOOHOO
Dude, GREAT GREAT awsome short story!!!!! You give a great story with a great animation. Keep up the good work.
WOOHOO
Dude, GREAT GREAT awsome short story!!!!! You give a great story with a great animation. Keep up the good work.
Thanks! You just wait for the next one. Heartstrings are gonna get PULLED
Suggestion
Your whole video is a person talking, first of all he is talking to fast and I didn't quite get what he was saying. Second when you have a speaking scene show the person speaking from different angels so it won't become so booring. Give more work into your animation, let his eyes move, eye brows etc. Else, keep up the work.
Wowo!
The story was well entertaining and kept me ongoing to the well end. Good job with the animation and sound effect, keep up the great work!
Bad!
I didn't find this flash exciting at any level. All I saw was some really bad animation, some bad sound effects and lack of story. You should put more time into your work.
Noted. I'll try to include more Avatar porn in my next flash.
Work
You should work more with the animation and sound effects. Else the story was good, just give more work into it. When you get a new idea throw more work in animation and sound, and the ratings will fly :D
what?
I couldn't find the "play" button and I didn't manage to start the video.. hmm
It is autoplay
Suggestion
I suggest shorten the intro and make it more advanced. If you are going for an easy intro maybe try a very cartoonish flimmering look?
Oh... yes i would try this too
good
actually this was good, all you need now is some sound effects to sparkle it
special
I think there was to much time watching the tv with the same screen all the time. Became kind of booring. The story was good, but 2 much tv + better animation would also help
I'm a 17 year old boy from Norway wanting to grown in the gaming industry when i'm older (game design). In my spare time I play video games and newly started working with flash.
Age 32, Male
Sandvika
Donski VGS
Norway
Joined on 3/19/10