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WOOHOO

Dude, GREAT GREAT awsome short story!!!!! You give a great story with a great animation. Keep up the good work.

NicBuhrmanProjects responds:

Thanks! You just wait for the next one. Heartstrings are gonna get PULLED

hmm

Your video actually started having a story and then you just blew it off? Please when making a video try give out a whole story, even if the animation ain't that great.

Suggestion

Your whole video is a person talking, first of all he is talking to fast and I didn't quite get what he was saying. Second when you have a speaking scene show the person speaking from different angels so it won't become so booring. Give more work into your animation, let his eyes move, eye brows etc. Else, keep up the work.

Wowo!

The story was well entertaining and kept me ongoing to the well end. Good job with the animation and sound effect, keep up the great work!

Bad!

I didn't find this flash exciting at any level. All I saw was some really bad animation, some bad sound effects and lack of story. You should put more time into your work.

EtchASketchClock responds:

Noted. I'll try to include more Avatar porn in my next flash.

Work

You should work more with the animation and sound effects. Else the story was good, just give more work into it. When you get a new idea throw more work in animation and sound, and the ratings will fly :D

what?

I couldn't find the "play" button and I didn't manage to start the video.. hmm

SlipperyMooseCakes responds:

It is autoplay

Suggestion

I suggest shorten the intro and make it more advanced. If you are going for an easy intro maybe try a very cartoonish flimmering look?

Hellje responds:

Oh... yes i would try this too

good

actually this was good, all you need now is some sound effects to sparkle it

special

I think there was to much time watching the tv with the same screen all the time. Became kind of booring. The story was good, but 2 much tv + better animation would also help

I'm a 17 year old boy from Norway wanting to grown in the gaming industry when i'm older (game design). In my spare time I play video games and newly started working with flash.

Njaal @Zeronix92

Age 31, Male

Sandvika

Donski VGS

Norway

Joined on 3/19/10

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